I was learning about how to write a recount in detail with rich words.
I found it easy to write down my recount of what I did at Camp Kaitawa.
I found it challenging to add rich words because i'm not very good at writing intresting recounts.
Next ttime I will try to make my recount more intresting by adding more rich words and drecribe what I felt, smelt and tasted.
Hey daniel, its me Ruvae.
ReplyDeleteI love how you've put a lot of description about what happened that day.
Did you know that when I went to camp, when Umariki and I were kayaking we couldn't get back on our kayak.
Next time you could look back at your work and check your spelling mistakes.
ok thanks ruvae for the great feed back
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