I am learning about one moment in time about a little squirrel and the hawk.
I found it easy to write about what the squirrel was doing and how it felt to be a squirrel being cashed be a hawk.
I found it hard to remember what what happening in the video so I could write it down in a story wiht talking.
Next time I will make my story longer and add more describing words.
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