Thursday, June 18, 2020

My report writing

We were learning about Matariki by finding infomation about Matariki and write it all down on to a google slide and then write it in to a report. I found it easy to do the editing on my report because all I had to do was look through the report and correct my spelling. I found it challenging to write my report because I had infomation about Matariki will begin on july the 13th but I didn't know why. Next time I will make my report longer because I had lots of infomation to write about but I didn't use it all.

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  1. I liked how you added different slides for more information about matariki. Next time at the first slide you can add less stars.

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    1. i added 9 stars because there are nine stars of matariki

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  2. Hi me. I like the way I made the stars small so there is lots of room for any thing else I add. Next time I could put more infomation to my report so I have more slides and infomation.

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    1. Kia ora me, thank you for the feedback on this blog post. From :Daniel

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  3. Kia our Daniel,I really the way you added moving stars but maby next time you can add just one moving star?

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    1. Hello Aylah, I think adding the moving stars might have been related to Matariki but it might be a good idea to add one moving stars. Thank you Aylah I will think about next time i do a matariki report. From Daniel :D

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