BIkes in schools: REFLECTION

10 reasons about what makes a good recount

Tiana H and I thought of these reasons of what a good reacount looks like.

In my writing I have inclueded what 10 things make a good recount.

I found it easy to think of the basic stuff of what makes a good recount

I found it hard to think of 10 ways that can make a good recount.

Next time I will think of better ways that make a good recount.

My goal for term 4 is to write more and read a lot more books. 

Use 1,2,3 planning.

Have power words instead of boring words.

Use capital letters for nouns.

Make it shorter than you would normally do.

Use, who, what, when, where.

Use capital letters at the start of a sentence.

It has to be something that happened recently.

Have adjectives and adverbs.

Have 5 ideas in a sentence.

Make it interesting so the reader would like to read all of it.

How we can encorege birds to come to our school

We were learning about birds, habitatas and pests like stoats and possums

I found it easy to polyline all the things I have on my google drawing.

I found it hard to think of what to put so a bird would like to come to our school.

Next time I will add more things the would encorage birds and keep pests away from birds.

In my drawing all the grey stuff is metal. The blue is bird bath and water. The brown things are wood. I added the animals so you could see what happens with my drawing.

New zealand native birds

 we were learning about native, endemic and introdused birds.

i found it easy to write all the native birds to new zealand.

I found it hard to polyline the bird because i keeped double clicking and i had to restart.

Next time I will add more infomation and more birds.

Manuka e-book Group #2

We were learning about how to make a e-book around rangi and papa like the one we did about making scratch animations.

I found it easy to re-write the story of rangi and papa and there 6 children.

I found it hard to make my mini charachters on my slide.

Next time I will add more detail to my charachters so people know witchm is witch.

Persuasive writing. Is the environment our responseobility

 We were learning how to do persuasive writing and the topic we did was IS THE ENVIRONMENT OUR RESPONSEOBILITY.

I found it challenging to to write my draft copy because my evidence didn't give me ideas to write about.

I found it easy to decorate my published writing slides.

Next time I will make my writing longer so the reader will be more interested.

My persuasive poster

 This is a product the I have thought of myself. Its the EVERYTHING BOX. With it you can everything you have ever wanted. You can think of something and stick your hand in and a toy verson will come out in your hand and you simply throw it up in the air and it makes it life size